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Post by LilNinjaWolf on Jul 11, 2008 18:47:35 GMT -6
You're welcome.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 12, 2008 4:49:08 GMT -6
You're welcome. ^_^ Btw, what is with the live preview thing as I type? I noticed it yesterday. Did you add that on when you fixed everything? Oh, and I stil can't say damn without the words looking like: d**n.
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Post by LilNinjaWolf on Jul 12, 2008 11:13:12 GMT -6
It's a new code I put on. You can preview what you've typed without pressing the preview button at the bottom of your post. I've been looking through a lot of different codes and adding different once or just testing out others and taking 'em off. I most likely keeping the preview one on though.
Yeah, cause I still have that one locked. PM with what the word actually is and I might unlock it.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 13, 2008 12:36:43 GMT -6
It's a new code I put on. You can preview what you've typed without pressing the preview button at the bottom of your post. I've been looking through a lot of different codes and adding different once or just testing out others and taking 'em off. I most likely keeping the preview one on though. Yeah, cause I still have that one locked. PM with what the word actually is and I might unlock it. Sure. Can I also show you the words I'll use in my fanfic as well? Remember, my fanfics tend to have mild language so I'm afraid the stupid thing will do it to all the words. That, and including Japanese words (like the Japanese word for You're Welcome) and Japanese symbols. I'm not real sure how all of this will work out, though...
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Post by LilNinjaWolf on Jul 13, 2008 13:41:40 GMT -6
Yeah, well your welcome is fixed.
I got your pm and sent you one back. It depends on the Japanese words too. PM those when you need them and I'll figure out how to post them.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 13, 2008 15:04:35 GMT -6
Yeah, well your welcome is fixed. I got your pm and sent you one back. It depends on the Japanese words too. PM those when you need them and I'll figure out how to post them. Do you want, Japanese words (romanji style like we write in English) or the Japanese symbols (which has kanji, hiragana, and katakana)? Or both?
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Post by LilNinjaWolf on Jul 13, 2008 16:09:53 GMT -6
Both. I usually like to read the romanji style best though.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 13, 2008 20:08:19 GMT -6
Both. I usually like to read the romanji style best though. Cool. I'll send you a PM for it when I get the chance. Since I don't have the titles for the other chapters yet I'll send you a PM for those when the chapters come up.
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Post by birdgirl on Jul 16, 2008 20:23:07 GMT -6
Chapter 7
Tears streamed down Yuri’s face. She couldn’t believe what just happened. The only person she was close to left, gone.
Hajin looked up at her laughing menacingly. "If you don't want to end up like your brother, you will join me! Think about it!” He added. “Everything that you’d ever want, at your fingertips! You’ll be much richer than your father could even dream to be! And all you have to do is aid me in my conquest.”
Her tears turned to rage. “My decision is that of my brother’s!!! I will never EVER help you!!!! And no amount of money or power can change that!!!!” She punched him in the stomach as hard as she could.
“Hajin leaned forward slightly. “Then you’re next.”
Yuri ran behind him quickly, picking up Gazu’s sword. She wasn’t that skillful with a sword, but Gazu had taught her enough in the past.
Hajin swiveled around, swinging his sword towards her neck. She held the sword up. The two swords clanked together fiercely.
Hajin smirked and swirled his sword til Yuri’s flew from her hands.
She gasped as the sword plundered to the ground.
“Good bye Yuri.” He said with his sword over his head about to strike.
A flash of green suddenly burst forward, kicking Hajin to the ground.
Yuri stared speechless at the giant orange masked turtle.
“Hi! You’re here, Michelangelo, has arrived!”
She smiled slightly.
“Show off!” A voce behind them said.
She turned around to see three other turtles. They each had a different color bandana.
“Hey, you can’t hide perfection, Raphy!” Michelangelo smirked.
The red masked turtle growled. She assumed that one was Raph, or Raphy, One of the two.
“Cut it out you two!” The blue masked turtle demanded. He came over and put his hand on her shoulder. “Are you ok?”
“For the most part.” Yuri stated. “Who are you guys?”
“My name is Leonardo and…”
Hajin suddenly kicked him. “I believe we have some unfinished business.”
The turtle with the purple bandana stepped in front of Yuri. “Leave her alone!”
Hajin look fiercely him. “And who are you four to stand in my way?”
“I think we think we’re the turtles to defeat you!” He pulled out his staff.
“Yeah!” Michelangelo agreed. “Wait, what?”
“I think not!”
The red masked turtle suddenly stood behind Hajin. “Oh don’t worry, we will.” He punched him in the back, pushing him to the ground.
Hajin growled, jumped, and pounced on the turtle.
Mr. Red Mask rolled backwards, flipping him off the edge of the building.
The orange masked one ran over to where Hajin had fell. “Oops!” He smirked, knocking the loose chimney over the edge of the building.
Yuri stood wide eyed. “You guys just took Hajin out in five minutes flat.”
“Yeah we’re awesome in that way!” Michelangelo walked over.
“Anyway,” the blue masked turtle said. “My name’s Leonardo. Leo, for short. And this is Raphael,” he pointed to the red masked one then to the purple one. “and Donatello.”
“And Mikey’s the annoying one!” Raph added.
She chuckled. “I’m Yuri.”
“What did that Hajin guy want anyway?” Leonardo asked.
“He wanted us to join him.” “Yuri said grimly.
The Don looked at her puzzled. “Us?”
“Gazu.” Tears poured down her face. “…my brother.”
They looked over at Gazu and were speechless.
A guardian landed on the building next to Gazu. Another one appeared next to Yuri. The first one picked up Gazu.
I am sorry, Yuri.” The second one bowed. “The utroms will take care of him according to your planets customs.”
Yuri nodded. “Thank you.”
The two guardians nodded and disappeared.
“Your planet?” Raph asked. “You’re an alien?”
“Yeah. We’re from Pazar. Well, that is, until Hajin got rid of it.”
“Whoa!” The other three said in unison.
“what are you going to do now?” Donatello asked.
“I dunno.” Yuri said softly. “I’ve lost my father, my home, and now my brother. I have nothing left. I- I dunno.”
“You could stay with us.” Leo offered. “We have more than enough room for you.”
“Yuri stared at them wide eyed.
“Come on, it’ll be great!” Mikey exclaimed. “We have pizza, TV, not to mention movie channels, videogames, oh and did I mention pizza?”
Yuri laughed softly.
“We got it made in the sewers!”
“The sewers?!” Yuri blurted
“Nice goin’ Mikey!” Raph slapped the back of his head. “You just have away our location!”
“We live in the sewers to stay safe.” Leo explained.
Yuri looked down. IT seemed like a good idea. She had no where else to go and they seemed nice. After all, they just saved her life. “Thank you so much!” She smiled. “I accept you’re offer!”
Leo nodded and smiled back. “Come on guys, let’s go home.”
Yuri followed them off the building. She had a home! Her father’s words rang in her head. ’I want you to remember, no matter how far apart we are, I’ll never stop loving you.’ She missed her dad dearly but she knew he would be happy that she found a new place to live.
He stood at the top of a higher building watching Yuri and her new friends leave. “Soon, Yuri.” Hajin said lowly. “Very soon.”
The End
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Post by Deleted on Jul 17, 2008 14:16:04 GMT -6
NUUUUUUUUU!!!! How can this cool fanfic end so soon?! Great fanfic, Crystal!
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Post by birdgirl on Jul 17, 2008 16:29:20 GMT -6
lol thanks! Srry its so short! My next one will be longer.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 17, 2008 16:50:34 GMT -6
lol thanks! Srry its so short! My next one will be longer. Thanks!
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Post by LilNinjaWolf on Jul 19, 2008 13:00:21 GMT -6
Cool. I'll send you a PM for it when I get the chance. Since I don't have the titles for the other chapters yet I'll send you a PM for those when the chapters come up. Ok. I'll look forward to it.
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Post by Leonardo on Jul 19, 2008 13:01:00 GMT -6
Nice job Crystal.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 19, 2008 15:36:25 GMT -6
Cool. I'll send you a PM for it when I get the chance. Since I don't have the titles for the other chapters yet I'll send you a PM for those when the chapters come up. Ok. I'll look forward to it. Okey dokey!
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